As noted in class on Wed., Sept. 24, everyone should submit a paragraph at the end of their second essay, that gives the following:
1. At least two comments that you received on your first essay (from fellow students or from Christina) that you think you need to work on
2. Whether you addressed any comments from your first essay, in writing the second one, and if so, which and how. Remember that for this part you can also talk about positive comments–things that people said worked well, and that you then decided to try to continue or do again.