Term 1 Essay Reflection

My only real fault is that I’m just too much of a perfectionist. Oh, and all of these other things.I think my biggest hurdle when I started writing these essays was formulating thesis statements and introductory paragraph sentences. While I’ve graduall…


The first comments I received highlighted the good relationship maintained with the thesis and the rest of the essay. During my entire essay it was very clear what the argument was saying and how it related to the thesis. I was also told that my first essays showed strange transitions between paragraphs that sometimes broke […]